● A brief concluding statement about the organisation’s activities
should be included if it is not well known.
● The release should finish with ‘ENDS’ to avoid confusion.
● A contact name and both daytime and out-of-hours telephone
numbers should be included at the foot of the release.
● Several versions of the same release may be provided for
different audiences and the publications which reach them.
Technical publications might appreciate a longer version of the
release, perhaps with a data or specification sheet.
● If a good photograph adds to the story, make sure one is
provided, suitably captioned, for those publications which use
photographs.
● If a brochure or price list might also help, include it.
● Asample of the product would be useful if it is a practical
proposition to offer this. This works well for foodstuffs, and is
essential for such items as books, video material and recorded
music.
● When a journalist is likely to need time to research and write
an important story, allow extra time for this, using an embargo
to reduce the chance of the story breaking too early. Head the
press release:
‘EMBARGO: Not for publication or broadcast before XX.XX hours,
XXday, XXdate’.
● Embargoes may need to be flexible. A Sunday-morning story
can be allowed in a Saturday-evening newspaper, especially if
the story is national and the evening paper is in a town where
the company has head offices or a major factory.
An example of the way in which different versions of a press
release can work arose when a Scottish firm of investment
managers was raising funds for an Oxford college. The story was a
UK national story to attract the main body of investors, an Oxford
story because of the target, and a Scottish success story because of
the company’s location. Usually such variations can be handled
easily simply by changing the introductory paragraph, but quotes
may also need amendment or to be attributed to a different indi-
vidual.
Attention to such small details will take a little extra time, but
will improve the effectiveness of each press release.
How: writing for the press
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