WRITING ESSAYS
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Victoria’s Secret catalog transform real women into ornaments,
valued exclusively for their outward appearance. These publications
are responsible for defi ning what is sexy and reinforce the belief that
aesthetic appeal is a woman’s highest virtue.
CONCLUSION B: Women are up against a long history of devaluation and
oppression, and, unfortunately, the feminist movements have been only
partially successful in purging those legacies. Sexually charged images of
women in the media are not the only cause of this continuing problem,
but they certainly play a central role.
— Amy L. Beck, “Struggling for Perfection”
ASK A QUESTION
INTRODUCTION C: If you’re a man, at some point a woman will ask you
how she looks. “How do I look?” she’ll ask.
You must be careful how you answer this question. The best tech-
nique is to form an honest yet sensitive opinion, then collapse on the
fl oor with some kind of fatal seizure. Trust me, this is the easiest way
out. You will never come up with the right answer.
CONCLUSION C: To go back to my main point: If you’re a man, and a
woman asks you how she looks, you’re in big trouble. Obviously, you
can’t say she looks bad. But you also can’t say that she looks great, be-
cause she’ll think you’re lying, because she has spent countless hours,
with the help of the multibillion-dollar beauty industry, obsessing about
the differences between herself and Cindy Crawford. Also, she suspects
that you’re not qualifi ed to judge anybody’s appearance. This is because
you have shaving cream in your hair.
— Dave Barry, “The Ugly Truth about Beauty”
PRACTICE 6 ANALYZE CONCLUSIONS
After reading the paired introductions and conclusions above, indicate the
techniques used in each conclusion to refer back to its introduction.
A. Technique used to link introduction and conclusion:
Reference back to
a quotation
B. Technique used to link introduction and conclusion:
Restatement of
main idea
C. Technique used to link introduction and conclusion:
Repetition of key
words and restatement of main idea
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