WRITING ESSAYS
114 Part One • How to Read and Write in College
PRACTICE 2 IDENTIFY TYPES OF INTRODUCTIONS
Read the following three paragraphs. Identify the kind of introduction they
use, and write the number in the space to the left of each.
1. surprising fact
2. quotation
3. example or story
4. strong opinion
5. question
1
Several government studies have reported that the number of over-
weight children in the United States has doubled since the 1970s and that
13 to 15 percent of U.S. children are now overweight. The studies cite a
number of causes for this increase; however, the biggest factor is simply
overeating. The average serving at the leading fast-food restaurants has
ballooned with the popularity of “supersize” meals. Many busy families
now eat at these restaurants several times a week because the service is fast
and the meals are a good value. But overindulging consumers — including
children — are paying a severe price in terms of their health, for they face
a higher risk of diabetes, heart disease, and other conditions.
4
The U.S. people must stop wasting the world’s resources. Although
the United States accounts for less than 5 percent of the world’s popula-
tion, it uses 25 percent of the world’s natural resources. One of the worst
examples of waste is the amount of gas we consume. The popularity of
sport utility vehicles (SUVs) has dramatically increased gas consumption.
According to Northeast Environmental Watch, SUVs use 25 percent
more gas per mile than the average car. We also waste vast supplies of
water by using excessive amounts of water while we wash dishes, brush
our teeth, take showers, water lawns, and do other chores. We must stop
our excessive use of limited resources.
5
What does the new business environment mean for college stu-
dents — for your own education and career choices? A fast-changing busi-
ness environment creates fast-growth careers at the same time that it turns
other careers into dead ends. The conventional wisdom holds that the
wisest course is to pick a fi eld that is on the upswing. The conventional
wisdom is right — to a degree. However, in a turbulent environment you
cannot count on stability — especially in growth projections. Today’s hot
careers may soon be dead ends, replaced by tomorrow’s hot careers. This
means that success will come from considering fi rst what you want to do
and what you are good at, and then developing a set of all-purpose job
skills that you can transfer to the next growth area.
— Kenneth H. Blanchard et al., Exploring the World of Business (1996)
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