EDITING ESSAYS
634 Part Six • Word Use
The following is a part of a dictionary entry:
con • crete (kon´ kre
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t, kong´- kre
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t, kon kre
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t´, kong- kret´), adj., n., v.
-cret • ed, -cret • ing, adj. 1. constituting an actual thing or instance;
real; perceptible; substantial: concrete proof. 2. pertaining to or concerned
with realities or actual instances rather than abstractions; particular as
opposed to general: concrete proposals. 3. referring to an actual substance
or thing, as opposed to an abstract quality: The words cat, water, and
teacher are concrete, whereas the words truth, excellence, and adulthood are
abstract. . . .
— Random House Webster’s College Dictionary
Thesaurus
A thesaurus gives synonyms (words that have the same meaning) for the
words you look up. Like dictionaries, thesauruses come in inexpensive and
even electronic editions. Use a thesaurus when you can’t fi nd the right
word for what you mean. Be careful, however, to choose a word that has
the precise meaning you intend. If you are not sure how a word should be
used, look it up in the dictionary.
Concrete, adj. 1. Particular, specifi c, single, certain, special, unique,
sole, peculiar, individual, separate, isolated, distinct, exact, precise,
direct, strict, minute; defi nite, plain, evident, obvious; pointed,
emphasized; restrictive, limiting, limited, well-defi ned, clear-cut, fi xed,
fi nite; determining, conclusive, decided.
— J. I. Rodale, The Synonym Finder
Practice Avoiding Four Common
Word-Choice Problems
Four common problems with word choice can make it diffi cult for readers
to understand your point. You can avoid them by using specifi c words that
fi t your meaning and make your writing clearer.
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