EDITING ESSAYS
Chapter 34 • Word Choice 645
at decision making. (3) This becomes evident when a hive of honeybees
keeps growing and growing so much that it eventually outgrows its home.
(4) When that happens, the old queen shoves off, accompanied by a
swarm of about 10,000 bees. (5) Their challenge at this critical and de-
cisive moment is to fi nd the best possible location for the new hive. (6)
According to the study, the bees,
in the vast majority of cases in which
this happens, end up making good decisions.
(7) How do they swing that? (8) Do they in one way or another vote
or have a method of coming to a consensus? (9) As a means of discern-
ing the answer to this, the researchers conducted several experiments as
they observed the honeybees making their decision. (10) While the swarm
took a breather huddling together on a tree branch, scout bees searched
for suitable locations. (11) As the scout bees wended their way back, each
scout did a waggle dance to highlight what she had found. (12) Appar-
ently, during this process, some scouts fl ip fl opped and ended up dancing
to support other scouts’ fi nds. (13) The researchers concluded that the
swarm doesn’t wait for each and every one of the scouts to settle on one
location. (14) Instead, the swarm senses when a suffi cient and satisfactory
number of scouts, perhaps fi fteen or twenty, have agreed on one site. (15)
At that point, the entire swarm gets ready to make their move. (16) For
an approximate period of an hour, the bees warm up their fl ight muscles,
and during this time, the remaining scouts usually decide to support the
chosen site. (17) In this way, a solid consensus is achieved, and, in most
cases, it is the coolest possible location for the new hive.
(18) As a result of these experiments, the researchers note that the
bees’ process works because it makes sense. (19) The inside story is brought
to the group by independent individuals. (20) In the free marketplace
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