EDITING ESSAYS
550 Part Five • Other Grammar Concerns
increase. (4) These problems are common with people of all ages, races,
and educational levels. (5) They are especially prevalent among the
elderly. (6) The individual patient, of course, is affected in a personal and
sometimes life-threatening way, but society in general also has to pay for
the resulting increased medical costs. (7) A patient follows these simple
guidelines. (8) He or she can better understand what is wrong and what
to do about it. (9) First of all, make absolutely sure that the doctor’s in-
structions are understandable. (10) The doctor will probably ask if there
are any questions. (11) Think over each step of the instructions, and ask
for a clearer explanation of anything that’s confusing. (12) Repeat the
instructions back to the doctor and ask, “Is that right?” (13) Another tip is
to take notes on what the doctor recommends. (14) Either write the notes
yourself or bring along someone else to jot them down. (15) It is easy to
feel intimidated by being partially unclothed in the examination room.
(16) Ask to hear the necessary instructions in the doctor’s offi ce. (17) You
are fully clothed. (18) Finally, follow the doctor’s instructions carefully,
for recovery depends just as much on the patient as on the doctor.
EDITING REVIEW 2 (7 sets of sentences to be joined)
(1) Al-Qurain is a community in the small Middle Eastern country of
Kuwait. (2) Thirty years ago, Kuwait City offi cials began to use an aban-
doned quarry in al-Qurain as a garbage dump. (3) None of them thought
the area would ever be populated. (4) Fifteen years ago, the government
began to build subsidized housing in al-Qurain. (5) The dump was
supposed to be closed. (6) Kuwaitis continued to use the al-Qurain
landfi ll. (7) People soon lived all around the foul-smelling garbage pit.
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