written [mal polis ], coming as they do from the hand of a soldier, and indeed a Gascon, who has
always sought rather to act than to speak well."[89] Early in the seventeenth century, François de
Boyvin likewise stressed the simplicity of his language. Unlike the historians, he wrote, "I have
not enriched my discourse with a single ancient example, or decorated it with language carefully
selected from the rhetorical handbooks"; and he linked his directness of expression with his
military experiences, for "in discussing arms and combats, it was better that my language smell
of the cannon and the bearded, badly combed soldier than of the dandy."[90]
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By the reign of Louis XIV these claims had become fully conventional. At the end of his
memoirs, the financier and adventurer Gourville stressed that he had not sought "to correct the
style, believing that for a man as ignorant as I believe myself to be, it's enough that I make
myself easily understood."[91] Unlike many others, Bussy-Rabutin was proud of his style, but he
too stressed the simple openness of his account: "The reader may be astonished at my sincerity;
and indeed there are no memoirs whose authors speak of themselves as they do of others." He
alone, he claimed, fully presented his blemishes as well as his virtues.[92] At about the same
time, Antoine Arnauld repeated these conventions about style and sincerity. "As for the style," he
wrote at the outset of his memoirs, "I don't flatter myself that it is faultless; it is unstudied and
artless, since I've never applied myself to the rules. I speak my natural language, as I learned it in
the cradle." Like Madame de Sévigné, Arnauld claimed to be writing "naturally." Like Bussy-
Rabutin, he grounded his claim to sincerity in an indifference to others' opinions; he wrote only
for amusement, and even conceded that the events he remembered "are perhaps not those that
ought to have stuck most tenaciously. But who can boast of commanding his thought? In the
most serious occupations, in meditation and even in prayer, we are not its masters; it goes
strolling as it pleases, without demanding permission, and often stops before trifles that have
made the philosophers blush and the greatest saints cry out."[93]
Gourville, Bussy, and Arnauld thus attached writing to individualism. They claimed no absolute
vision of events. Instead, they promised to record only such particulars as had come before them,
without recourse to false artistry or efforts at a universal perspective. Such a focus on the self
had come to the memoir genre only slowly. Sixteenth-century writers hesitated to use the first
person at all. Monluc took this step but gave as justifications for writing about himself that his
experiences would offer useful examples to other soldiers and that others had attacked his
achievements; he stressed, in other words, the social nature of his undertaking, its relevance to
national utility and public evaluations of honor. "Do not disdain," he urged his readers,
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"you who wish to follow the path of arms, instead of reading about Amadis and Lancelot,
spending some time getting to know me in this book. You will learn to know yourselves and to
form yourselves to be soldiers and captains."[94] His comment neatly bridged the gap between
self-exploration and useful instruction. By exploring his own life he could encourage others to
form themselves properly.
A century later, as we have seen, Antoine Arnauld had dismissed even the issue of public use.
He noted the criticism that de Pontis's memoirs had evoked for their excessive devotion to the
personal, but he proceeded to present himself as writing in isolation, indifferent to others'
evaluation and possible use of his work. He had not even the excuse of descendants to write for,
and he made no reference to other family members who might have urged him to take pen in
hand; it was only the reading of de Pontis's memoirs that had stimulated him to undertake his
own. His language was to be unstudied, "natural," an immediate expression of self rather than an
application of "rules"—and in this it reflected, he claimed, his specific situation as a military
nobleman. Unstudied in their language, his memoirs were also to range freely in content. For the