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LEARNING
tip
Argument
4's
topic
statement
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Concrete
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supporting
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evidence
for
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Argumenl4
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Oplional
demonstration
Ihal
opposite
viewpoint
to
Argument
3
has
also
been
considered
You
may
have
noticed that the essay question doesn't ask for support or
evidence.
However,
it's essential!
It's important to get usedto
providing
support and evidence for everything,
even
when
you aren't
asked
for it.
3
Look
back
at the
essay
you
read
beginning
on
page
39.
Draw
boxes
around
(or
colour)
the stagesin the
essay.
Use
the
example
you
just
looked
at to
help
you.
dothis.
through
making
their
own
decisions and
being
directly affected by 4
their consequences.lthough
many
ofthese
young
people
may
benefit....-
to
some
extent
from
the greater experience and
knowledge
of their
family
elders, overall the scope for personal
growth
of
young
adult
family
members
is
reducei:l
in extended
families.
I
,
Promoting
the extended
family
model
will also be
likely
to
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disadvantage those
who,
through no fault of their
own,
cannot
live
in an extended
family.IIFor
example,
if their
children
live overseas; if
there is a
family
argument which,still prevents them
from
living
together, or if there
simply
are no children, then for the individuals
\concerned,
this
policy
fails.
No
matter what happens, it is essential
50
t!!!.~t
government support is available to people such as these.
In conclusion, it is clear that severe social
problems
will
result if a
return to
living
in extended
families
is encouragedJ IIndividuals
should be able to choose
how
they
organise their
living
arrangements, and
everyone
should
have the chance to enjoy the
55
benefits of independent livingJ
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---
Summary
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Recommendation
-..
Concrete
supporling
evidence
for
Argumenl1
Family
responsibility:
A
dangerous
policy?
Que
s
ti
0 n:
'It
is to the benefit of society for family units. living together, to
include the older generation:
What is your view on this matter?
---IO~en,
it.is
th.e
elderlv
oeople
t~emselves
who
are reluctan: to
live\
.
!with
thelf chlldren.ISeveral
mam
reasons
are
commonlll
owen
for 10
rtiliJThe first is that
many
want to retain their independence.
They~
want be able to
come
and go as they please, and to be able to
live
their
lives
in their
own
way
and not haveto fit in
with
other people,
even if they are
family.
When
with their
family,
they often feel they
have
lost
some
control over their
lives,
even if the alternative is to 15
rely
on support services
such
as visits
from
nurses
or
oeoole
to
cook
their
meals.!ISecondly,
many
elderly
people are
proud
of
being
able
___
to
look
after themselves, and
would
feel deep shame to be
looked
after bv an"one
even
close
famil\l
members.!IIn
other cases, the
___
children
may
have had to
move
to a distant city for
work
or other 20
. reasons, and their parents might not wantto
leave
the
house
andthe
placethey
knew
well,
and
leave
all their
friends
and neighbours to
'oin their children in a
citv,
or town
where
the"
have
no roots.
-
.....
There
has been talk in
some
political
circles
that
some
responsibility
for social
welfare
should
be shifted
from
'governments to
families.
This
would
involve a reversal of the current trend towards
increasingly smaller families and
would
encouraoe several
nenerations to
live
tonether in extended
families.!1
However,
this
~
---
danoerous
nolic"
that
could
lead to a variet" of social
oroblems
IInot
only
for the elderly peoplethemselves but also for the
families
that
---
would
have
to
look
after
them.1
Thesis
statement
Preview!
scope
furlher
concrete
supporting
evidence
for
Argument
1
General
statement
Argument
rs
topic
statement
introductions)
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Expr~~~i~~~;~"b
~~i'~~~;~l~~i~~~--I
eg In
conclusion,
.n !
Preview/scope expressions
eg
n.
will
be
examined
...
Your
teacher
will
give
you
some
journals. In
pairs,
choose
one, and for each article,
identify the
preview/scope
and the beginning of the conclusion.
Record
useful
expressions
that
you
find in the table
below.
UNIT2
clan
and
kinship
Concrete
supporting
evidence
for
Argumenl3
Concluding
sentence
Concrete
supporting
evidence
for
Argument
2
ENGLISH
FOR
ACADEMIC
PURPOSES
si
u
den
I
s'
boo
k
_'-
.....
Afurther
problem
is that
people
in the
family,
usually
women,
are
likely
to
have
to spendtime as carers.ljlhe inevitable consequence of 25
this is that the
person
or
people
have
to take time out
from
theirl-s--:
iobs and their
working
lives,
and not
only
do they lose the
income
and self-respect that a job
provides,
but also the ensuing gap in
their career
may
mean
that
when
they eventually return to
work,
they havelostthe opportunityto
develop
work
skills
that
could
have
30
ledtopromotion.r1This is
clearly
not to the benefit of society.
Argument
3's
topic
.stalement
44
Argument
2's
topic
statement